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I've been sweeping metaphors into a pile at my feet - since late last night when I woke up and found Belle dead across the page - laid out like she was swimming, outlined in grey chalk script - that curled away in looping words ending with a smiley face - they read, 'Juliet was never Juliet if she fell in love with Paris - and laughed behind the curtains of the stage'
Menelaus just smirked, looked at me and mumbled something about Troy and humiliation - He said, 'I keep getting these slashes all across my dreams but for the life of me I don't know how they got there' - 'Yeah, me too', I said and lifted up my shirt to show my chest, 'but after all this blood - it was Galatea carving me instead'

Today I think I'm done with trying to guess the shape of truth by examining these exit wounds that make me feel so hollow - Something tells me I should just be glad that when it cut me down - it didn't miss anything that was vital - So give me one more swallow of this bitter conversation - and I'll wrench it down again - shake my head and hit send - Maybe this way I'll finally poison that wandering Lancelot - whose madness always keeps me looking too far back - to a girl I once saw standing with a huge fake smile, holding hands and getting married on the train tracks - But it didn't take me all sixty of her photographs this time to realize this ghost was just a shadow burned on my retinas long ago - and, uncomfortable as I've been lately with feeling this normal, it makes the walk a little easier, just to know

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Given 2004-03-16

all my road before me by *balinlesavage is a mind-boggling piece and one that works beautifully as a metaphor for the road that we all have to walk, steep and tangled in places and with an unknown destination. (Suggested by `marble911 and Featured by `leodadominico)

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:iconsilentdark:
This is really odd, but cool, I love the tones you've used, excellent job with the blending of the photos.
:iconvyxx:
surreal...gives a feeling of a roller coaster, and the accompanying poem seems odd in a personal way, indecipherable except for the Greek references :D. alltogether very modern and cool
:iconzvennadin:
Wow, that's a really awesome shot! Dunno if it is or not, but it sure does seem like that's a really really steep hill. Nice job.
:iconsunilk2020:
wow...gd shot > i am still wondering how cld u stop at that point and take the shot, wel focused.
:iconprosui:
great shot, made me realize something
:iconjag2004:
the crop is everything on this picture. well not everything, but it makes the picture so awesome. I really love this, the perspective, the composition, the contrast. everything. perfect, great job

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:iconcoxi:
cool black and white manip.. wow.

some strange street by the way ;) :laughing:

:+fav: for idea and execution
:iconhippogriffon:
Whaou it is amazing to this that. Really well done :-)

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:iconraun:
oh my god. This is amazing, both picture and prose. I'm floored (seriously), so pardon the no good comment. Will put it in my fav's and see if I can figure it out later. Excellent work :jawdrop:
:iconsfmoe:
incredible ... love the pic and prose ...

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"The truth is permanent, and everything else falls by the wayside."
-Dave Chappelle

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