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Submitted: March 10, 2004
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I've been sweeping metaphors into a pile at my feet - since late last night when I woke up and found Belle dead across the page - laid out like she was swimming, outlined in grey chalk script - that curled away in looping words ending with a smiley face - they read, 'Juliet was never Juliet if she fell in love with Paris - and laughed behind the curtains of the stage'
Menelaus just smirked, looked at me and mumbled something about Troy and humiliation - He said, 'I keep getting these slashes all across my dreams but for the life of me I don't know how they got there' - 'Yeah, me too', I said and lifted up my shirt to show my chest, 'but after all this blood - it was Galatea carving me instead'

Today I think I'm done with trying to guess the shape of truth by examining these exit wounds that make me feel so hollow - Something tells me I should just be glad that when it cut me down - it didn't miss anything that was vital - So give me one more swallow of this bitter conversation - and I'll wrench it down again - shake my head and hit send - Maybe this way I'll finally poison that wandering Lancelot - whose madness always keeps me looking too far back - to a girl I once saw standing with a huge fake smile, holding hands and getting married on the train tracks - But it didn't take me all sixty of her photographs this time to realize this ghost was just a shadow burned on my retinas long ago - and, uncomfortable as I've been lately with feeling this normal, it makes the walk a little easier, just to know
Daily Deviation, 2004-03-16

Daily Deviationall my road before me by *balinlesavage is a mind-boggling piece and one that works beautifully as a metaphor for the road that we all have to walk, steep and tangled in places and with an unknown destination. (Suggested by `marble911 and Featured by `leodadominico)

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This is really odd, but cool, I love the tones you've used, excellent job with the blending of the photos.
surreal...gives a feeling of a roller coaster, and the accompanying poem seems odd in a personal way, indecipherable except for the Greek references :D. alltogether very modern and cool
Wow, that's a really awesome shot! Dunno if it is or not, but it sure does seem like that's a really really steep hill. Nice job.
wow...gd shot > i am still wondering how cld u stop at that point and take the shot, wel focused.
great shot, made me realize something
the crop is everything on this picture. well not everything, but it makes the picture so awesome. I really love this, the perspective, the composition, the contrast. everything. perfect, great job

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cool black and white manip.. wow.

some strange street by the way ;) :laughing:

:+fav: for idea and execution
Whaou it is amazing to this that. Really well done :-)

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oh my god. This is amazing, both picture and prose. I'm floored (seriously), so pardon the no good comment. Will put it in my fav's and see if I can figure it out later. Excellent work :jawdrop:
incredible ... love the pic and prose ...

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